Blue Skies Poem by Audrey Heller

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida

Blue Skies



How I hate, a dark dreary, rainy day!
It makes everything, so bleak, you
wish, it would go away! It can put you,
in a bad frame of mind and pull you
down, a notch or two. There isn't
anything, nice about it and it doesn't
do, anything for you! I hate the sound
of thunder and fear, the lightening as
well! Most of us are scared of it, as
far as I, can tell! Give me back, the
clear blue sky, then, let the sun, come
shining through. It puts you in a better
frame of mind and that, means a whole
lot too!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 29 December 2011

The thoughts in this poem are lovely and so common to us all. I see that you use the old style where we used to describe it as taking a hand full of commas and throwing them up in the air and letting them fall where may. Deleting many of those commas would add emphasis to the poem. Only two are really needed. Read mine – We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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