Audrey Heller

Rookie - 0 Points (2/28/32 / Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida)

Alone In A Crowd - Poem by Audrey Heller

Sometimes, in a crowded room, you
can still feel alone. So many people
surround you, but you're strictly on
your own. Looking around the room,
not one familiar face, you see. Should
there be any conversation, it's going
to have to come, from me. I would
have thought just the opposite, seeing
a new person appear. But the way it
looks, it's not going to happen here.
People have become much more
reserved, then they used to be. At
one time, they would pin you down
and gab away. Now, I can't even find
one, who has anything, to say. Next
time, I'll not accept invitations, unless
there's somebody there I know. I'll
just have to be polite, give them a
smile and turn them down, by saying
no!


Comments about Alone In A Crowd by Audrey Heller

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (8/7/2016 12:01:00 AM)


    I am so glad you have mentioned this. Countless people would like to share your views ditto. Thanks a lot, Audrey Heller, with a bouquet of good wishes. I quote a few lines below:
    People have become much more
    reserved, then they used to be. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (8/6/2016 11:09:00 PM)


    Nicely written poem! (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (8/6/2016 2:51:00 PM)


    Congratulations on being selected member of the day..I know the feeling you conveyed in your poem..every body text messages now instead of chatting.. good poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/6/2016 10:34:00 AM)


    Congrats! ! ! Beautiful poem for the day. You have spoken through the hearts of many. There are many times we feel lonely in crowd. Just to be polite and smile is the best way of dealing with this. Loved reading each lines. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (8/6/2016 9:13:00 AM)


    Lonely in a crowd- - A feeling most of us might have experienced in parties or crowded places, even in our own familiar environment if we do not have some one to talk, to smile or to share feelings.Thanks for the beautiful poem.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda Anil Kumar Panda (8/6/2016 9:09:00 AM)


    Sometimes it feels good to remain reserved and observe things around. Nice poem. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince Clarence Prince (8/6/2016 7:39:00 AM)


    Yes, maybe it pays just be polite... by saying no! (Report) Reply

  • Ratnakar Mandlik (8/6/2016 7:31:00 AM)


    Excellent poem. Heartiest congrats for it's selection as poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren Tapan M. Saren (8/6/2016 6:09:00 AM)


    Awful poem. Nothing can I speak more. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/6/2016 3:32:00 AM)


    How awful it could be, for one to feel lonely amidst a crowd and who is to be blamed, I wonder. Anyway, inspiring write. Congrats on being the PoD. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (8/6/2016 3:24:00 AM)


    Nice poem. Congrats on being poet of the day! In such situations, one just has to learn to enjoy being an observer... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (8/6/2016 3:21:00 AM)


    Much more reserved! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Judith Blatherwick Judith Blatherwick (8/6/2016 3:19:00 AM)


    Very well written with a very accurate observation. I too find crowds very lonely places. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/6/2016 1:08:00 AM)


    Well written, Audrey. Sometimes we really can be alone in a crowd, can't we?
    Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

Read all 14 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 19, 2008



[Report Error]