Ex - Factor Poem by palesa deejay manaleng

Ex - Factor

Rating: 5.0


You gave him your love
Not realising he lies
Your heart was his
So he played

I look around at the broken
Pieces and pray
Pray to God I can fix them
Sweep them together and hold them in my hands

Hold you tight and dance
Your pain away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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