Follow Me Poem by Barry Van Allen

Follow Me

Rating: 5.0


My massive disappointment in the thing that has been done,
is only overshadowed by my knowing that you're the one,
You have hurt my trust in fairness,
You have bruised my ego too,
to know that I had friends that were as unaware as you.

There is some basis in your statement,
though, not to that degree,
The time or two that I have been near you,
does not, in fact, reflect me.

For a self - appointed critic,
you fit that mold too well,
as far as future dealings go,
all I can say is 'GO TO HELL '!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 07 April 2009

Super awesome poem, there are parts I can sortta relate to. Giving you a 10. Hugs, Linda

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Con Nie 12 April 2007

I bet that felt satisfying writing that - especially the last line. :) Sincerely, Connie Webb

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poetry lover 27 January 2007

I liked this poem, nice flow

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