A smile, a look
connectedness felt.
Booked.
We enjoyed the same music,
ordered the same cake
our thoughts merged
our beings shook.
Hooked.
I agree completely with Max. This is altogether fun and concise.
I enjoyed the playfulness! Sound and sense both. I like the progression from 'booked' to 'hooked'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
From looked to hooked a tight and clever construction. Rgds, Ivan