Hot Stuff Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Hot Stuff

Rating: 5.0


So, hot:
even the stones sweat

& the road
unpeels

it self

as if it were having
second thoughts

about being a road
in the first place.

It clings to our footsteps
reluctant to let it go.

I hold your hand
in mine

droplets of sweat dribble
down your arm into my palm.

Kisses sliding off
our lips

refusing to stick.

“Sh*! ...it’s hot... is it not? ”

“Yeah, sure is...sure is! ”

Us
in total
accord

but hot
too hot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 16 April 2008

Bodies sliding off one another...sweat puddling..dripping off the end of our noses.. Oh, yes! Summertime in the South! ! I know it well....

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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