In a quiet dream
I saw you walk toward
then pass yourself
There was no shadow
of your journey but I knew
where you'd been
Great depth expressed in a few words. Absolutely compelling.
The magic of intuition, captured to perfection in this fine example of 'less is more'. Sublime penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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For me this is my favorite of yours and one of the best poems I have ever read on PH. It is simple, yet complicated and evokes some pretty intense feelings for me personally. Superb, Jerry, simply superb. Ridge