Right as rain they say
but how can rain be right
If you're driving
it can be quite wrong
unless of course
it hits the town right of you
but even then it isn't right
its quite vertical actually
unless it's in inches upon the ground
then, it could be horizontally sound
during rainstorms, thirsty plants can be happily found
yet it only fills humans with glee
when it is experienced dryly
All the same
rain is rain
invented to wash away pain
thus, here it shall remain
so I guess its alright-
right as rain can be
A unique twist that is creative -like a gently flowing river that picks up speed suddenly!
In the process of dissecting the cliché, you also show the mercurial mind at work, as it follows a train of thought, however unlikely. I was conscious throughout that the speaker is also driving a car as she thinks these thoughts, so it's multi-tasking with the cliché dissection running parallel to driving. The phrase contains an interesting endorsement to whatever it introduces: rain being natural is always right, the comparison to rain means you are right too - how reassuring!
All the same rain is rain invented to wash away pain thus, here it shall remain so I guess its alright- right as rain can be ..........beautiful lines.........rain really washes away pain and agony.............wonderful write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lighthearted and clever. I never understood that saying, either, and I've been around a long, long time.