Shock Wave Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Shock Wave

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She sent me shock wave
“You got to be patient and brave”
She was passing the sentence
I felt as if plane was crashing

It was almost decade
She was never dead from memory
She remained off and on the scene to cause worry
I had thought of her kindness so many times and felt sorry

I was down with serious fall
I just opened talk with call
I am injured and have pain
She was seemed with less concern

“I shall be no more single”
Her utterance gave me sense of trouble
I had found living heaven in her
This was adding me concern more

I forgot my pain with deep shock
I thought this was just a smoke
I could not dine properly
As it was thunder stroke really

“I have found him” she was uttering
I was simply tearing apart
It made me nervous with fear
I could feel punch severely and more

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

She sent me shock wave “You got to be patient and brave”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

Alpa Suba likes this. Alpa Suba Nice.. 9 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2014

She sent me shock wave “You got to be patient and brave”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno and Alpa Suba like this. Alpa Suba Nice.. 2 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

very good Ruth Hardy9 minutes ago very deep Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 January 2014

nice, you found, , , Jawahar Gupta10 minutes ago I forgot my pain with deep shock

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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