Athul KrishnaA

Rookie (17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

04 Lost (My favourite) Poem by Athul KrishnaA


Darkness suddenly surrounded me
As i found myself lost deep within a forest,
I was surrounded by creatures unknown
Not a clue had i about my whereabouts

Lost in the forbidden forest,
I was scared and ran about,
To strike upon a tiny ray of light,
To get some relief from this horrible plight

Suddenly it began to get really hot
As i opened my eyes to see where I was
I was surprised to find myself awake
In my bedroom, in the middle of the night....

Submitted: Wednesday, April 09, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, April 16, 2008

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  • Rookie Maitri Rath (10/3/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    Hello Athul, I am so glad to read your poems. Keep it up. Tell sushant to start writing too, he too wrote wonderful pieces of composition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allysyn Bryant (5/22/2008 3:06:00 PM)

    this is very well done. =) good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mo Camino (5/5/2008 6:20:00 AM)

    this is really good.
    it says really well what i think we've all experienced at some stage
    hard concept to explain.
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nkululeko Mdudu (4/24/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    Good one, very familiar situation in a very articulate manner. I must say it is always a sigh of relief to know you are not alone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaIsY *AnGeLiTa* PeReZ (4/23/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    I dont like it. I love it. You explain here something I could never explain...
    Why do I get lost in my dreams? ... That is how I feel sometimes but waking up
    also freaks me out... And dont ask me why... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/23/2008 6:23:00 AM)

    nice poem. how many times i too have got lost in my dreams. only to discover with relief i am safe at home. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tan Ma (4/23/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    Nice write! Got me there :)) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (4/22/2008 1:10:00 PM)

    Understandably this is your favourite. You've expressed very well an unconscious fear of desertion. In a child it's a normal dream but few people are able to write a so fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Subbaraman N V (4/22/2008 4:53:00 AM)

    A nice dream.......................! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/22/2008 3:09:00 AM)

    how many times i have got lost in my dreams. what a relief when we fynd it was a dream', nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andre Chia (4/21/2008 11:35:00 PM)

    not bad... r u really 10 years old? haha... if u r... keep it up... better than me when i was 10years old... keep on riting dude! (Report) Reply

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