Treasure Island

Athul KrishnaA

(17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

05 The sea


Oh just look at the sea!
With waves so high, touching the skies,
Splashing on the sands of the shore.
There are childrens and adults everywhere,
All so happy, enjoying the plessure!

Here is a child,
Building a sand castle and,
There is a child,
Flying his kite;
Over the beatiful blue waters of the sea!

Here is a man,
Selling his kite to a fair child and there;
Is an ice-cream woman,
Selling her ice-creamsto the,
Crowd of children surrounding her!

The sun is shining like a new gold coin between the white clouds,
And here I am standing on the sands of the ground,
Licking a melting ice-cream while my,
Brother plays in the spashing waters of the sea with;
My father who is playing with him!

Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008
Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (5/3/2008 12:18:00 PM)

    My dear little Atul,
    I read your poems. You are really a ray of hope for India poetry.At present u are writing poetry akin to your age and maturity. But with your growing age you must focus on social issues, our country's burning problems etc. That will make you a real poet/great poet. Pl. go through my poems...u will understand me and my advice. It is upto u then.
    with blessings,
    sathya narayana (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (4/23/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    what lovely poem. i too love the sea, sand and sun.you have painted a picyure of what all sea lovers feel. (Report) Reply

  • Cathleen Hodgkinson (4/22/2008 11:02:00 PM)

    Incredible poem Athul...one of my favorites as I too love the sea...you have a way with words that put someone in your experience. An experience of a happy time! Thank you! Cathy (Report) Reply

  • Riquetta Elliott (4/22/2008 8:33:00 AM)

    You fantasize the nature very nicely just like I do (Why My Room Can't Be A Garden) you're accomplishing really good. (Report) Reply

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