Treasure Island

Athul KrishnaA

(17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

02 Inspiration


Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!

Submitted: Wednesday, April 09, 2008
Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008

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  • DaIsY *AnGeLiTa* PeReZ (4/23/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    I like it.. short... descriptive...
    It would help me when little rocks are in my way...
    I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger... (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (4/23/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (4/22/2008 3:07:00 AM)

    it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that (Report) Reply

  • Melvin Banggollay (4/21/2008 11:13:00 PM)

    Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer.

    thanks and best wishes,
    melvin (Report) Reply

  • Allen Steble (4/9/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    i once read somewhere that a poem with 3 great ideas should be 3 lines long, a short poem with a great message, yes life is about struggle but it is sweet when you get what you desire after you have struggled long for, and thats what makes us appreciate it, gr8 poem Athul :) (Report) Reply

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