Athul KrishnaA

Rookie (17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

02 Inspiration


Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!

Submitted: Wednesday, April 09, 2008
Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008

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  • Rookie Janri Gogeshvili (5/4/2008 9:55:00 AM)

    Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed … (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaIsY *AnGeLiTa* PeReZ (4/23/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    I like it.. short... descriptive...
    It would help me when little rocks are in my way...
    I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/23/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Crocker (4/22/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    Wise wom one so young. Well done. Sue (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rajagopal h (4/22/2008 11:03:00 AM)

    Real inspiration Athul Krishna...well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Subbaraman N V (4/22/2008 4:50:00 AM)

    Short and sweet with a great message! Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/22/2008 3:07:00 AM)

    it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (4/22/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    Mature thinking for such a young poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Melvin Banggollay (4/21/2008 11:13:00 PM)

    Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer.

    thanks and best wishes,
    melvin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/11/2008 1:40:00 AM)

    rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the world.....to stardom.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (4/9/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    i once read somewhere that a poem with 3 great ideas should be 3 lines long, a short poem with a great message, yes life is about struggle but it is sweet when you get what you desire after you have struggled long for, and thats what makes us appreciate it, gr8 poem Athul :) (Report) Reply

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