Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!
rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the world.....to stardom..........
Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer. thanks and best wishes, melvin
it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that
Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed …
I like it.. short... descriptive... It would help me when little rocks are in my way... I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger...
it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i once read somewhere that a poem with 3 great ideas should be 3 lines long, a short poem with a great message, yes life is about struggle but it is sweet when you get what you desire after you have struggled long for, and thats what makes us appreciate it, gr8 poem Athul :)