Treasure Island

Manonton Dalan

(virginia, usa)

041611U some changes in course


everybody clap as i swing
i heard 'you lots of practice'
i was lucky i got going straight
good hundred yards to green
even i'm still breathing faster
on green on two; par is good

i noticed sand on greens
they must be airing it out
blooming trees are pretty
apples budding so as pines
lakes are fresh new walls
crows are still wary to people

Submitted: Saturday, April 16, 2011
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