Athul KrishnaA

Rookie (17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

06 Water - Poem by Athul KrishnaA

Water, water everywhere;
But not a single dropp to drink!

The oceans stretch wide and broad;
All over the world, full of water, never to dry up!

Lakes and rivers;
They are everywhere,

As ice in the hills, and oasis in the deserts;
As vapor in air, and as water in oceans!

Man wastes and misuses
The valuable, water!

Life won't exist without water
So do not pollute it for,

WE NEED IT TO DRINK.


Comments about 06 Water by Athul KrishnaA

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (4/24/2008 6:42:00 PM)

    Athul, great job! Here are a few corrections you might make.

    Water, water everywhere;
    But not a single (drop) to drink!

    The oceans stretch wide and broad;
    All over the world, full of water, never to dry up!

    Lakes and rivers;
    They are everywhere,

    As ice in the hills and oasis in the deserts; (no comma)
    As vapor in air and as water in oceans! (no comma)

    Man wastes and misuses
    The valuable, water!

    Life won't exist without water
    So do not pollute it for,

    WE NEED IT TO DRINK. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (4/24/2008 6:39:00 PM)

    A valuable message and soon it will become even more important. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nkululeko Mdudu (4/24/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    your message is that worthy of global appreciation. I for one am ready to mlisten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (4/22/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    A very good message ATHUL, keep writing!
    -Raj Nandy
    22Apr08 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008


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