1.0 Poem by Laura Kiernan

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Rating: 4.0


When I checked on my poems
A surprise was there
And it concerned me so
That I gripped my hair

Someone had gone through
And rated all low
I guess they don't like them
But still, even so

I wonder why they hated them?
I wonder what gives?
I wish I could find out
Where that person lives

I'd knock on their door
And ask to come in
And ask for some help
For some new way to spin

All the poems they rated
A two or a one
I'd ask what was wrong
And what can be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Laura, ignore those scores. They are from people who only hope to wound others not offer anything constructive. Just keep writing what I see is fine work.

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Roger Cornish 19 February 2008

Love this! Maya Angelou alway scores amongst the highest in the Famous Poems listings.... Your driving force will propel you into that league.... Ignore the bigots! Roger.

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Jay Boyd 19 February 2008

Wow that isnt a 1.0 poem i'd give that a 9.infinite. it was good so if you want to talk about this poem or mine or in general just hit me up. good write keep it up i like this poem

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Laura Kiernan

Laura Kiernan

Seattle, WA
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