We build a world
where truth is dangerous.
We paint smiles,
smiles to hide
we don´t know why.
Fear and lies,
the bricks we use
to build this mask.
Can we stand
what we are?
Please don´t ask,
just smile.
I really do not understand your poem and those people who agree with you. People who really have angers and fears do not smile. Smils are kindness to people who you don't know. The poem should go: We paint smiles Smiles to show we love our earth Let's build a world Where smiles heal everybody's fear.
A simple smile will lift up your spirit..thanksfor this.. Meggie
This is the truth and probably the better way to act; otherwise, we end up hurting too many or being hurt in return. It is too easy to offend others, even when being truthful, and once offended the consequence cannot be undone. Better to smile and send the message of acceptance and wishing one well.
All truth unfurled in guise of a smile...well done....thank you
Can we stand what we are? Please don´t ask, just smile. agree with your say you did here..smiles and happiness belongs to innerslf and when there is broken feeling and unvisible pain..no smiles come to lips to appear.. but smiles really are the sign of pleausre and satisfaction.. hey you are really very sweet way writing your poems and I enjoy your work which is being done from the core of your sweet and kind heart.. well done dear friend..10/10
Smile is the light of this world..I agree with Ben, it is a better way to act not to hurt each other sometimes, even if it seems not very sincere..But actually I believe that any smile is true in origin for its intention to bring more light to Earth. Humanity really needs more smiles. Thanks for this thought-provoking poem, best wishes and sincere Smile to you :) A.
A sad truth presented with skill and originality. But I feel the wistfulness behind the words. 10, of course. Always your friend, Sandra
wow that was amazing, told like an insider... :) excellent! 10++ :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a way to paint smiles, people who paint smiles must not like them selfs..