Kiracakes09 ...

Rookie (7/26/85 / Queens, New York)

2005/07 A House Is Not A Home - Poem by Kiracakes09 ...

The house we've built
looked so pretty on the outside
now its filled with only my feelings
and now you hardly ever come in
those times when you do
its just a shell
just your body, not your heart
just your peck, not your kiss
just your hug, not your embrace
i need your love
i need you to want me
if you dont want me then why are you in my house
that's right, my house
you've moved your feelings, your furniture out
my home gets chilly at night
imprints of your pictures on the wall
toothbrush still in the holder
toilet seat still up

Comments about 2005/07 A House Is Not A Home by Kiracakes09 ...

  • Rookie Priyanka Shetty (3/22/2008 11:50:00 PM)

    i agree.. its touching... awesome poem...... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/22/2008 11:13:00 PM)

    a home is a home for the homeless..........a great place to live.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie RoJa Mitchell (7/20/2005 4:24:00 PM)

    great poem, it's touching and neat, and that's good ;) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 20, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, May 17, 2010

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