300 Grams Of Aryan Poem by Reshma Ramesh

300 Grams Of Aryan

Rating: 2.8


The little one
only 5 years old
my cuter half
big saucer like eyes
chubby fingers
brave his soldiers
trained his horses
strong his elephants
clever his chariots
protect the king
fast his queen
faster his mind
I must confess
he beat me
in a game of chess! !


p.s.-author's note......300grams is the weight of the brain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2009

well, your 'cuter half ' is better than you in the game of chess...no ego to defend there, you know...must be free flowing game...as is your poem...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 February 2009

I got amused and thrilled. nicely written. shan

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C. P. Sharma 09 February 2009

a smart write.......... well composed. CP

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Allan Macli Borges 10 February 2009

funny and kindly written. very nice poem indeed.10

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Indira Renganathan 12 February 2010

Very nice to read about your son...today's generation is stronger than the earlier one and I guess it's marching stronger and stronger further in every sense....best wishes to both of you....God bless

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Nalini Hebbar 26 October 2009

that's witty...your heart is swollen with pride...great going

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pride and love together have painted a picture of amother and son

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beautiful read, each line resounds with depth

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Janice Windle 10 February 2009

This is lovely, Reshma! You were a very good loser as well as a good poet when you wrote this charming portrait! x Jan

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Reshma Ramesh

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Bangalore, India
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