♥ Interwined In Lace♥ Poem by Elizabeth Tyease Collins
♥ Interwined In Lace♥
I have him stuck in my mind,
his lips so soft and tender,
our fingers creeping to interwine,
our hearts beating at the same time,
are soft giggles filling the room,
soft lace covering our insecurities.
Body to body we form as one,
you've stolen my heart.
Sweet darling how you hold me so,
how you whisper sweet quotes of your love,
us wrapped in this lace us two,
my arms wrapped around you.
The beating of his heart grows faster,
the more I layed my head on his
shoulder,
the more excited I got when he
played with my hair and looked me
straight in the eyes.
You sent this angel
down to send me the love
that I've prayed to want this whole
time,
the intimate times we spend holding
each other everyday through the nights
at end.
The times when you even leave the room
I cringe,
for the craving of you scent, your touch,
that sends shivers down my spine to want
you near.
Is this love that my heart seems to jump
for joy to feel you even touch my shoulder?
Is it lust that I want you to take full advantege
of me but after that, cuddle?
Must it be love that the days are a blur
but when you're around time seems to go in slow
motion?
Or is it lust that my fantasies of you and I
cross my mind even when you're near me.
The lace I hold close to my body,
as he wraps his arms around my waist,
we close our eyes and lean in close,
to our sleep of sweet escape
Very sensuous write. You have used excelent imagery filled with the heat of pasion that comes with such warm, spicy love.... Very good... Bonnie
Ooh! , Mi Cada Cosa, this is quite Amorous, I love it! Love, Kyle
Interesting work here. Of Course, the title is enigmatic. What is the 'wine' reference all about and how does one become inter-wined? Perhaps you meant to say the lace was wound around you and he? Adeline
this is beautiful writing love, it definitly from the heart, im not sure what to say its so private but so many people can relate, keep up the good work! sara-rae xx
It's great writing can make me remember 'those days'. This is wonderful and smokin' (in a sweet, sincere fashion) .
Tyease my dear this is so nice - your words are so heart felt and warm from your soul a real pleasure to read the love you felt. Thank You
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 10:34:47 PM # 1.0.0.1119
this is a good poem way to good i would rate it a 15/10 and its pretty long but its really good got me a little sad D=