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(A) 56 (LOVE/PASSION) YOU....MY LIGHT

I want to become....
A dropp with no thoughts
A stop that no one sought
Nothingness so that I can absorb
Empty so that I can fill
Until
I fill You in
And Illuminate
In Your sight
And
I become Your ray...
You, my light.......

Submitted: Wednesday, February 07, 2007
Edited: Monday, January 10, 2011

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  • Chandan Roy (2/20/2007 12:06:00 PM)

    AMEN! God Bless your prayer...... this is just so beautiful.

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  • Cyclopseven R (2/11/2007 8:41:00 AM)

    May your wish be granted and a 10 from me.

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  • Diane Violet (2/8/2007 12:23:00 AM)

    This is perfect and beautiful.....................................Diane

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  • Geoff Warden (2/7/2007 10:56:00 PM)

    And had this had been said any other way, it would fall short of the perfect poem

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