I dog fooded long gone I home come
Miles high respect I for animal dumb,
He me look see I love him
Unconditional licking him no whim.
Dollars bring when he come born
Children million money look puppy see forlorn,
Joy in walls house paws thru door
Puppy love wants fooded for whining more.
Whining, more, name brain twisted will call Oliver
Oliver gobbled enough menu no deliver,
Licking frenzy children laugh sadness delete
Puppy dog happiness make family complete, except
If only his loving sloppy lick
Could rid my painful life, a drowning alcoholic
Puppy give life a happy kick
maybe one more drink will do the trick.
nb. Written in the style what alcohol
can do to the brain and start life's
spiral downwards.
hey this one is so coooooooooollllllllllllllllllllll! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! something different, innovative.. I mean I read this one like two or three times.. i should say very amusing and entertaining.... Hey I have an addiction for video games, .... some say game fanatic's show hallmarks of alcohol addiction.., so it is the same.! ! ! ! PH helps to get away from that though.. and reference to puppy, now if the puppy drank the drink it can be turn out to be a funny scene too! ! ! ! ! ! anyway i enjoyed this one, nice word play here, I like when some one do something out of the conventional norms...... reading this one was a novel xp for me.. full marks.. love shan
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I would like to translate this poem
This was real interesting and had a good flow from start to finish.