Marilyn Lott

Freshman - 646 Points (5-28-42 / Washington state USA)

A Bear Named Teddy Fuzz - Poem by Marilyn Lott

Once upon a time there was
A little bear named Teddy Fuzz
At night he’d hate to go to bed
“I wonna’ play tonight, ” he said.
“Okay, my son, it’s up to you
For I’ll not tell you what to do.
“Stay up all night, ” said Teddy’s mother
But don’t wake up your little brother.”
He built a house with tinker toys
He played with all his soldier boys
With blocks and cars and boats and such
He took his ball and played some catch.
But pretty soon Teddy’s eyes grew faint
He dropped the brush as he tried to paint
So Teddy climbed in Mama’s bed
Upon her shoulder he laid his head.
“I can’t stay up, you’re right, ” he said.
“Could you carry me to my bed? ”


Comments about A Bear Named Teddy Fuzz by Marilyn Lott

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (8/16/2012 1:36:00 AM)

    beautiful composition (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (11/21/2008 10:37:00 PM)

    Lovely poem, took me way back in time. The question is 'who comforts who? ' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (11/12/2008 9:08:00 AM)

    excellent poem-story! finely penned! ....10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pamela Lutwyche (10/18/2008 8:21:00 AM)

    What a cute rhyme. I love teddy bears. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie toruk macto (9/26/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    CUTE! ! ! I LOVE teddies....and this poem! !
    Also, its fun to read cuz it rhymes...
    Total, a kiddish 10! !
    haha! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amie-Lee ...... (8/11/2008 10:07:00 PM)

    This is such a cute poem, I still keep all of my old teddys, and I'm close to 17 years old.

    Thanks so much for sharing: -) : -) : -) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (4/29/2008 11:36:00 AM)

    Hello there Marilyn. Thanks for this cute little poem and it contains a larger than life priciple. Blessings, LC (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (12/20/2007 4:43:00 PM)

    My kids too thought they could play all night but the sandman won in the end (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 4, 2011


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