A garden of thorns and thistles,
Someone had ceceicved you my love;
And flying up high like an eagle to view the world,
But someone had stolen your love away from me.
I can't trust anyone again in this land of hatred,
For you came and ate from my tree of love;
And now you are very worried!
But there will be a better tomorrow for me.
Every betrayal has repentance. Tomorrow always comes with brightest future and positivity. Poignant write.
simple but i wish it had more lines but was short and to the point.
Wow! If everyone had this mindset, the entire world would be a better place to live. Wonderful piece of writing.
Hope and Dreams! ! ! For a better tomorrow! Going through the odds of life. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
Peace and love to all mankind without racism! ! For a better tomorrow. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.
A poignant write yet it ended with a positive thought. Yes, there is always light at the end of the tunnel and there will always be a better tomorrow if we keep on spreading love and peace to all.
...there will be a better tomorrow for me. A wonderful write, especially how it ended on a optimistic note. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Praise God we can move forward with God's strength and love. Many can relate from these words Edward...Excellent poem.....