Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 27,854 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Tomorrow - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A garden of thorns and thistles,
Someone had ceceicved you my love;
And flying up high like an eagle to view the world,
But someone had stolen your love away from me.
I can't trust anyone again in this land of hatred,
For you came and ate from my tree of love;
And now you are very worried!
But there will be a better tomorrow for me.


Comments about A Better Tomorrow by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/16/2015 6:32:00 AM)

    A lovely devotional poem................................... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,219 Points Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:51:00 PM)

    Praise God we can move forward with God's strength and love. Many can relate from these words Edward...Excellent poem..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 9, 2010



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