Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 119,378 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Tomorrow - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A garden of thorns and thistles,
Someone had ceceicved you my love;
And flying up high like an eagle to view the world,
But someone had stolen your love away from me.
I can't trust anyone again in this land of hatred,
For you came and ate from my tree of love;
And now you are very worried!
But there will be a better tomorrow for me.


Comments about A Better Tomorrow by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Frank Davis, Sr. (4/24/2016 7:46:00 AM)

    Heartfelt and perceptive, Edward.
    I sincerely wish you that better tomorrow.
    Excellent write! (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Butters Paul Butters (3/18/2016 5:46:00 PM)

    Great thoughts Edward. If Only....... It's so simple yet... (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (2/23/2016 4:35:00 PM)

    Wow! If everyone had this mindset, the entire world would be a better place to live. Wonderful piece of writing. (Report) Reply

  • Mysia Hayling Mysia Hayling (1/18/2016 10:05:00 AM)

    simple but i wish it had more lines but was short and to the point. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (10/2/2015 6:37:00 AM)

    Every betrayal has repentance. Tomorrow always comes with brightest future and positivity. Poignant write. (Report) Reply

  • Jr Cuyam Jr Cuyam (9/28/2015 3:15:00 AM)

    Nicely penned and awesome depiction of moving on in life (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (8/16/2015 6:32:00 AM)

    A lovely devotional poem................................... (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:51:00 PM)

    Praise God we can move forward with God's strength and love. Many can relate from these words Edward...Excellent poem..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 9, 2010



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