A Bit More! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A Bit More!

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Need a bit more courage not to shed tears,
Seek a bit more patience not to be in anger,
Travel a bit more distance to find the love you require,
Knock a bit more passionately for that person to hear.

Though we are the fast runners and thinkers on the earth,
We alight before the destination, as we are in haste,
A bit more tolerance could have saved many hearts and lives,
A bit more understanding could have molded us to be in peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 January 2013

man has to go through a bit more evolution to arrive where you and i would like him/her to be. i don't know if man has time left for that. thanks for sharing. and for comment on my poem. bri

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But the things are laid up for a show and it is now very late for most of us to set things right. A piece with an appealing charm.

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Prasanna Kumari 11 November 2012

good poem with good message fit for a practical world

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