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A bit of deep thinking

The clock ticks far away
inaudible yet present
as each measured space
between moments collide
with emotions that split
into a trillion atoms of thought
I choose a handful to
follow and chase
tracing their lost trails
of light already disappeared
but held in memory,
this beauty of thought
glorious abundant thinking
a privilege of consciousness
a gift presented freely
to enjoy in wonder
without bodily restraint
creates my humanity
that manifests in love

Submitted: Saturday, June 09, 2012


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  • Smoky Hoss (9/15/2012 7:23:00 PM)

    Deep, and wonderful, thinking, and writing.

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  • Karen Sinclair (6/30/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    Sheer bloody brilliance, , , for once an intelligent piece not stuffed with gigantic words just to make me feel thick as two short planks...
    I think your expression of your personal visuals on the thought process is delightful and mind opening for the reader, .... tyvm karen

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  • Charles James (6/11/2012 8:47:00 PM)

    ~A privilege of consciousness~ Excellent poem!

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  • Dave Walker (6/9/2012 1:17:00 PM)

    A really great poem, like it.

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  • Valerie Dohren (6/9/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    Brilliant piece of poetry, well done.

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