Simon Collins

A Lovers Moment - Poem by Simon Collins

Standing too close to me
In this cool late summer evening
Clusters of tiny flies dance to a silent rhythm
like drunk atomic particles
Your smile lights a fire
Far away in the psychedelic twilight
A chimneys Unblown smoke curls and unwinds
into a soft translucent cushion
You better go, he is inside
I say in my head while noticing your eye colour
Wanting to look deeper
The sun is almost spent and the cooling earth relents
It's warmth
I wonder where he is you say
As the colours darken and pull away from the light
You are gone

Comments about A Lovers Moment by Simon Collins

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (5/8/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    You create the scene,
    the unsaid feelings that speak loudly
    throughout this poem.
    An enjoyable and reflective read. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (5/4/2012 6:40:00 PM)

    I love this poem Simon, it's very deep, lyrics flow to the rhythm of your heart. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 3, 2012

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