A Bitter Kiss Poem by Stefanie Fontker

A Bitter Kiss

Rating: 4.0


Such a bitter kiss
Bestowed by thy lips
I lay upon the ground
A fight so unimaginable
Such sweeping blows
To cut through my heart
I weep at such failure
To fool myself once more
I shall never triumph
Over such a love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

To be fooled by a kiss Knowing much lies ahead Is to give life a total miss And live dull and morose as lead........ Very good write and I welcome you to my page too

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Bernard Snyder 18 September 2014

Powerful display of emotions, my friend. Congrats' on having this poem voted as 'poem of the day'. I am so proud of you. Stay blessed!

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Rachel Henley 07 October 2011

I love this so much! Short yet hard hitting. Simply wonderful.

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Lenore Lee 11 October 2011

Hits straight to the point. Truely astouding.

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Rose Favela 12 October 2011

I love this poem I get the message your sending and I can feel the sorrow with each word I read it's a lovely poem you've got great talent

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Adeline Foster 19 June 2015

Interesting and surprising, takes one aback. Read mine Who Am I Adeline

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Kevin Patrick 18 September 2014

First love, first betrayal, a story told before and told again, and yours aspires with the good, so long since I read one of yours, still a nice experience.

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Lenny Camacho 18 September 2014

I read it... it felt like a concrete blow... harsh and over-emotional... thanks for sharing

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Tribhawan Kaul 18 September 2014

Emotions well expressed. Congratulations dear poet for it being 'poem of the day;

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 September 2014

Joy and pain overwhelming emotions that is painted

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