(October 18,1995 / Marikina City)

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A Broken World Needs Unity

A broken world needs unity
And it does not need mutiny.
Because a world pieced together
Make good moments last forever.

Don’t make this world an amputee
Let it stand, move, and walk firmly.
A complete world is just better
Than a disunited structure.

Make this broken world whole again,
Make it a united domain.

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Copyright © 2010 by Obed Dela Cruz

(February 19,2010; Marikina City)

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Submitted: Friday, February 19, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, February 24, 2010

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  • Jc Lunaria (6/30/2010 2:00:00 AM)

    well written..
    truly a broken world can only be fixed by unity.
    i wonder when will it happen.
    .obed. yep i am part of sama ka org. (=

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  • Terence George Craddock (5/26/2010 2:16:00 PM)

    I also liked this very much, received with thanks and deep appreciation.

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  • Supriya Prathapan (3/24/2010 2:54:00 AM)

    This is the need of the hour. All human beings should come together as one to save the world from further destruction.10++

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (2/27/2010 4:24:00 AM)

    Bravo Obed! I liked this one. we are the World, if each one betters himself the world would be more united than ever...

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  • Fleance Candide (2/21/2010 1:41:00 PM)

    smart personification. could be called cheesy but effectively so.

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