A Busted Myth Poem by Robin Bennett

A Busted Myth

Rating: 4.5


Baby, hold me tight and-
away from the grips of sheer insanity,
I don't do love at first sight,
Something I consider a myth,
or a gypsy folk tale at best.

I had the perfect vantage point,
when you walked in, your-
confidence preceded you,
by a mile.
Until the whole exquisite part-
caught up with you.
It was then that love sucker,
punched me, and I fell hard.

Gravity was no longer a
concern of mine. Between you
and the booze buzz, I was engulfed.
My head spinning in some strange
space place. Light years ahead of
myself, I was already naming our babies!

Usually, this motor mouth can't be quieted,
until now. I was sputtering out foolishness
a mile a minute. Finally valium relaxed,
my sanity returned. The longer we spoke,
the harder I loved. But, I don't believe
in love at first sight or the loch ness monster.

After a few weeks of "us", I was opiate hooked,
feeling warm and fuzzy inside;
and wanting no part of giddy love rehab-
I just wanted to enjoy that sky high ride,
I had never known.
For years, we loved fearing the Earth
would surely spin out of control.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Hot and buzzy. Licking myths like Honey.

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James Harding 22 July 2012

drinking taking valiums and opiates... he took advantage of you while you was drunk you didn't have a chance to escape the love lol good write 10/10

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Ronn Michael Salinas 22 July 2012

There are unnecessary punctuations, it seems. The drug references are worrisome lol to be honest

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Connor Whyte 20 July 2012

Fascinating this really spoke to me I don't believe in love at first sight but when you feel it you don't want to believe it. This is a beauty.

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Black On Black Arts 19 July 2012

Robin you are indeed a great writer light years ahead of anything i have written or read i only wish i could draw such a vivid picture in my work as you did u made me a believer thats no myth B.O.B.A

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Robin Bennett

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