It is breeze that blows us so,
Takes us wherever we go
Across the water to flow
To a wonder that we know
From a story very old
About a cavern of gold.
It has been for ages told
That only those with hearts bold
And noble can see the soul
Of the cavern as a whole.
If stealing is not their role,
Danger is kept in control.
yeah i can realy feel it, yeah rhymes pay a major role indeed..... that's what i can do.... i just write in free verse, i like your short and sweet, but refreshing ones, and those words speaks a lot too cheers 10++
fine poem, i like the rhyming scheme particularly (aaa...) thru out. Thanks for sharing.
kkoollllllll poem u goty here... one can feel the rhymin sounds... keep on writing peace
Beautiful, lovely, exceptional, clever Fantastic, amazing, a splendid endeavor I enjoyed every word, please continue to write your message is great, and really quite brite
I loved the flow of this piece. seems like you tossed it off easily which does not take away from its' content.
This a true poem in general, I mean in literal, in a poetic mind it is also true but a different description for me. And what was true to both is that one must be righteous to see the light.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your rhymes lend an appealing musical flow to this well written piece. 10, for you. Sandra