Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie (4th June 1976 / Benin)

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A Cavern of Gold for the Noble

It is breeze that blows us so,
Takes us wherever we go
Across the water to flow
To a wonder that we know
From a story very old
About a cavern of gold.
It has been for ages told
That only those with hearts bold
And noble can see the soul
Of the cavern as a whole.
If stealing is not their role,
Danger is kept in control.

Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Submitted: Friday, May 15, 2009

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  • Clarence Brown (11/6/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    I loved the flow of this piece. seems like you tossed it off easily which does not take away from its' content.

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  • Akram Saqib (10/20/2009 12:31:00 PM)

    it is a great poem in all senses

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  • Kobik William (8/19/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    short precise with a captivating rhym.I loved it.

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  • Trevor Berryann (8/17/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    I liked your rhyming pattern that you used in this poem

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  • Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan (8/16/2009 11:02:00 PM)

    This a true poem in general, I mean in literal, in a poetic mind it is also true but a different description for me. And what was true to both is that one must be righteous to see the light.

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  • Myrtle Thomas (8/16/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    Oh what a most beautiful place to be. I could imagine this place as I read, it has a very calming effect on the reader as a soft sweet melody. Lovely

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  • Indira Renganathan (8/2/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    'If stealing is not their role,
    Danger is kept in control'....speaks the purport of the poem... otherwise sounds musical10

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  • surya . (7/3/2009 7:47:00 PM)

    very imaginative and lovely
    voted10
    surya

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  • Obed Souza (6/14/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    Lovely! Yes, a breeze can lift us high!
    Thanks for sharing.

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  • Frederick Mcgettrick (6/11/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    I beg your pardon, that's not all right,
    I spelled that word wrong, the word is 'Bright'

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