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Almedia Knight
(6/13/2009 6:09:00 PM) |
HYi,
I didn't rate your poem in my comments below...a solid 10. good luck with your writing!
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Almedia Knight
(6/13/2009 6:06:00 PM) |
Hi Naseer,
Great writing that I enjoyed.
'In the sunbathed expanse of the sky-birds were on the wing-now lost in the quaint net of limitless space' my, my, my! Poet you out did yourself-or maybe not since, I have not read all your work and never will since poets poems lives on. You expressed a fresh perception of sceneries that I've never seen-I actually saw what you saw penning this beautiful poem. The images presented in this poem were striking or vivid in every line in this beautiful poem, but as your poem states, ' the wind blows them away in a moment'.
Thanks for reawakening me to the importance of setting time to the moment.
With regards,
Almedia
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Summer Heat
(6/11/2009 1:59:00 PM) |
oh my god...your poetry is so vivid...i can almost see everything in my head everything that you have written...beautiful...your imagery is so powerful...i have literally no words!
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Stephen Magill
(5/19/2009 7:49:00 AM) |
wow, i am now totally mortified that i ever commented on your other poem. i strive to one day be able to write a poem like this. perfect in EVERY aspect and you know me well enough to tell you if it wasnt. steve
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Sreelekha Premjit
(2/14/2009 12:40:00 AM) |
I loved reading this wonderful poem replete with beautiful images..Thanks.
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Raj Arumugam
(1/6/2009 1:46:00 AM) |
as mesmerizing as a gypsy's song...
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Ruerd Visser
(12/30/2008 1:47:00 AM) |
Wonderfull how your poem makes everything come to life.
Keep writing on my friend, love to read your work.
Heavenly greetings from home
Boomfriend Ruerd
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Mamta Agarwal
(11/24/2008 5:34:00 AM) |
lovely poem, vivid imagery and concluding lines. these brief moments of respite take us out of ourselves, rejuvenate even if short lived.10
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Reshma Ramesh
(11/21/2008 10:33:00 AM) |
well thought and well penned! !
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