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Is It poetry
(9/25/2009 12:51:00 PM) |
Do not worry about it dear..
You said..lol..the dirty rats..
Your cheese so dear they wast..
Hidding in the sand... i do..
and there it is..i wait..
like you..for crumbs to come..
my way from you...iip...so smile.. :)
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Anand Madhukar
(9/16/2009 3:18:00 PM) |
All that really matters in the end is that you write beautiful poetry.
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Afzal Shauq
(9/14/2009 2:19:00 PM) |
very much realistic approach and the way you wrote this piece is enough interesting heart feeling type..well done and hope you wil write more and more..10/10
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Rup Pokharel
(9/13/2009 2:33:00 PM) |
I like your art.
Good art indeed.
I love ready ur fine art keep it up.
10+++
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Allan Macli Borges
(9/8/2009 12:32:00 AM) |
friend, some people aren't ready for some style. you're very creative and I liked this one so much...
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Akram Awadat
(9/7/2009 2:42:00 AM) |
beautiful poem, fantastic one
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Olamide Sojinu
(9/4/2009 9:03:00 AM) |
you are just wonderful girl! i love your work. please keep it up and careless of what people say. you are great lol!
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Christopher Lee
(9/4/2009 2:18:00 AM) |
when the fruit is ripe it is beaten by many; if it is raw nobody bothers to even look at it
since you are growing many may attack; pl do not get disheartened...surge ahead; you will have a glorious future
God Bless You
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Romeo Della Valle
(9/3/2009 9:00:00 PM) |
Dear TaMaRa, your creativity is based on your work, what do you care what some narrowed minded people think, let the music plays, this is a big wold, you got my honest respect, I have many poems with not rating or comments, but that does not stop me from writing more, I simply keep writing, somebody will like it..Love and Peace, Romeo(Thanks for your valuable comments on my poems, I really appreciate, f those ratings, it is just a manipulating tool, Love and Peace, Romeo
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