A Child In Red Dirt Poem by Marilyn Lott

A Child In Red Dirt

Rating: 4.5


He was just a little kid
In a kid’s kind of world
Examining the places
Where the red dirt swirled

Hills and little trenches
To climb and investigate
Thoughts and visions
For a child to create

There’s no better place
For a youngster to enjoy
Than in the red dirt country
They don’t even need a toy

Just old-fashioned imagination
That all little children possess
Tucked into their little heads
Many things they can access

There’s nothing like watching
A child in a world of red dirt
Let’s imagine we’re a kid again
You know, it wouldn’t hurt!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
June Feir-Cruz 15 September 2008

Ms. Lott, this poem reminded me about being in the beautiful island of Kaui for a vacation. I have never seen anything like it in my life. The dirt was literally red and they get into everything and the children enjoy playing on it. A '10'

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

A beautiful composition with nice imagery. 10+

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Mark Nwagwu 09 October 2008

Read you this morning, Marilyn, and thanks indeed for taking me back to my childhood and bringing all that into me again so that i can go out and roll in the grass and pick up, not red soil, but sandy soil, with my hair all filled with sand. Oh, ti's so wonderful to be a child all over; better still, be like a child all the time. thanks. Mark

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Reshma Ramesh 19 October 2008

this is so beautiful........well penned

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Sylvia Feeley 24 November 2008

It is sad that as we grow older, we seem to lose our imagination. Maybe we adults should take time and play in the dirt again. Thanks for such a nice reminder of childhood.

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Melvina Germain 14 August 2015

Excellent Marilyn, I think it's time for a children's Kindle book perhaps, I would love to see that.....

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2012

Simple & innocent is the world of a small child where a bit of red dirt is enough to make him happy. Grown ups cannot compete. Lovely poem.

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

Sorry I liked to crawn you rhymes To say climb and chase... Will be softer... I think With out hurting your soulful phrase...!

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

I love babies... And this one Adorable... you can sing and dance With the words...

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Sylva Portoian 18 May 2012

I love babies... And this one Adorable... you can sing and dance With the words...

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Marilyn Lott

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Washington state USA
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