Dustin Bennefield

Rookie (Semptember 11,1991 / GA)

A Confession - Poem by Dustin Bennefield

A mother and child
So close together
Yet so far apart

A barrier between them
So creativly smart
Torn down by words

A talk
A confession
A simplicity of trial and error

Problems resolved
Questions burned down
A mind will soar

An hour or two
Words are complete
What is born will end

All in all
They are both saved
And end with an embrace
And I LoveYou

Copyright 2006 Dustin Bennefield

Comments about A Confession by Dustin Bennefield

  • Rookie - 0 Points April Fung (6/6/2006 8:24:00 PM)

    hello. i wonder whether this is your confession? it's nice, and it seems like the words come from your heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Geoff Warden (6/6/2006 6:39:00 PM)

    dustin I am sorry I believe you told me but you have a mastery of words that do compare and surpass myself (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gerardino (6/5/2006 11:34:00 PM)

    A simplicity of trial and error, tis a great line................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Flying Duck (6/5/2006 10:02:00 PM)

    hey this is a great poem i really like it your a great writer! !

    madeleine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina PrettyBrownEyes (6/5/2006 5:03:00 PM)

    sweet and simple and to the point. i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anisha Notelling (6/1/2006 9:34:00 AM)

    wow ur so good at writing! ! ! sweet....oh and in need of sum help, my profile says i'm 861! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 11 but i'm only 14 helP! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 4, 2006

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