A mother and child
So close together
Yet so far apart
A barrier between them
So creativly smart
Torn down by words
A talk
A confession
A simplicity of trial and error
Problems resolved
Questions burned down
A mind will soar
An hour or two
Words are complete
What is born will end
All in all
They are both saved
And end with an embrace
And I LoveYou
Copyright 2006 Dustin Bennefield
A simplicity of trial and error, tis a great line.................
hey this is a great poem i really like it your a great writer! ! madeleine
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I would like to translate this poem
dustin I am sorry I believe you told me but you have a mastery of words that do compare and surpass myself