lips that touch, the ground of a cup
that tastes that nods on
a wonder that was never
there before
like a solitude, of desires
takes the bitter
or the better
that ends, with a look that
sees no one
in the closeness of the
dawn, the hop that gallops
makes one refresh
perhaps a little pop
of what is life
in a burden, have a little
puff
good puff over a cup of tasty wine, Anto...philosophy in sweetness...good write 10
the wonderous ways to enhance and escape harsh realities, perhaps the title should be a cup of wine and- is step with the Dionysos 10
This poem is like the title itself, Fine wine, Enjoyed the read, had a little puff! ; D
you words make a cup of wine pleasurable and enticing, imgaination knows no bounds.10+
Fluent, mellifluous and delicious like a cup of red wine.10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a touch of carnal pleasure from the bitter and better taste of wine...good penning.