on tangled hair
you lay there alone
you bite your nails
you laugh so hard
on your hazy lines
you dance you sing
you cry you laugh
on moods that swing
like a crazy pendulum
you say my name
without remembering
what love was there
once, everlasting
you vomit
what we had and
then you swallow them
all again
i cry seeing you
like this
away from your senses
i hand this flower
for you
the smell may make
you return
from day one
when you were real
when you still feel
Love and flower go very well and you’ve made it. Ten+ [with smiling flowers] Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv
Touhing and tender yet rabid and real as the beauty of the flower is contrasted with the condition of the recipiant. Well done my friend.
Light hearted write with deep intent! Well done.; D
Sad poem, yet well-written. A lot of compassion displayed. Thanks for sharing and also CONGRATS. Well-deserved 'poem of the day'!
Poemhunter.com Beautiful poem. Rightly ruled as 'the poem of the day'. During the course of life, we, sometimes, feel robbed of our prized possessions. Then, we rise and make an effort to regain our composure.
A beautiful poem of loss and longing Congratulations on your poem being named poem of the day
very sad indeed...the scenes created in this poem may hauntingly touch the reader's hearts......
Swimming in the sea of sadness. Yet rich in creativity!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Giving her a flower to get her to realise her true self, and understand her true feelings. Touching.