Antonio Liao

Freshman - 791 Points (november 7,1957 / dapitan city)

A Flower For You - Poem by Antonio Liao

on tangled hair
you lay there alone
you bite your nails
you laugh so hard
on your hazy lines
you dance you sing
you cry you laugh
on moods that swing
like a crazy pendulum

you say my name
without remembering
what love was there
once, everlasting

you vomit
what we had and
then you swallow them
all again

i cry seeing you
like this
away from your senses

i hand this flower
for you
the smell may make
you return
from day one
when you were real
when you still feel


Comments about A Flower For You by Antonio Liao

  • Veteran Poet - 1,951 Points Bernard Snyder (12/17/2014 1:50:00 PM)

    Sad poem, yet well-written. A lot of compassion displayed. Thanks for sharing and also CONGRATS. Well-deserved 'poem of the day'! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,931 Points Rajnish Manga (12/17/2014 11:44:00 AM)

    Poemhunter.com
    Beautiful poem. Rightly ruled as 'the poem of the day'. During the course of life, we, sometimes, feel robbed of our prized possessions. Then, we rise and make an effort to regain our composure. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,680 Points Noreen Carden (12/17/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem of loss and longing Congratulations on your poem being named poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/12/2014 4:04:00 AM)

    very sad indeed...the scenes created in this poem may hauntingly touch the reader's hearts...... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,758 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/20/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of sadness. Yet rich in creativity! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Alistair Graham (12/17/2013 7:25:00 AM)

    Nothing is
    Permanent; the crazy
    pendulum of time
    holds this truth
    in fast flowing rivers

    budding flowers
    reach from the earth
    to touch the heavens,
    their scent tangling
    in threads of dark
    clouds
    then snaking back
    seeking the ground
    where minds wonder
    along winding roads.

    with ideas in my head,
    I get up from my desk,
    walk outside to check
    the sky; it’s fine. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,233 Points Tony Karas (12/17/2012 6:22:00 AM)

    Very nice. I could feel your torture and concern for her... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/24/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    Light hearted write with deep intent! Well done.; D (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,758 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/7/2010 7:32:00 PM)

    Touhing and tender yet rabid and real as the beauty of the flower is contrasted with the condition of the recipiant. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/28/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    Love and flower go very well and you’ve made it.
    Ten+ [with smiling flowers]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Lingerie-IG*
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems
    niv (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (10/10/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    i hand this flower.

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (9/12/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Giving her a flower to get her to realise her true self, and understand her true feelings. Touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luningning Minguez (6/26/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    oh...
    i love that last stanza! ! ! ! !
    very sweet and touching. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2009 11:45:00 AM)

    hand this flower
    for you
    the smell may make
    you return
    from day one
    when you were real
    when you still feel.... beautiful feeling if some one offers u the flower.. great joy....10

    u read mine un der same heading'flowers for u' when i was discharged from hospital and doctor send me flowers onrecovery... pse read it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,148 Points Marieta Maglas (6/12/2009 1:44:00 PM)

    ''i hand this flower
    for you
    the smell may make
    you return
    from day one
    when you were real
    when you still feel''
    this symbolic lyric poem prove that we need to have feelings for being existent, we need emotions for feelings, a great idea.....10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/4/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    Very lovely poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (12/13/2008 4:36:00 AM)

    oh....sir...loved this poem....the sincerity of this poem is heart-wrenching....
    thank you very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/5/2008 5:44:00 AM)

    a hearfelt poetic flower of love and sympathy to one who suffers without knowing what, from one who suffers from the knowledge of that...thanks a lot for sharing your feelings, Anto...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arin Tumanuvao (11/3/2008 7:56:00 PM)

    I like this poem..alot. It gets a 10 from me! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/4/2008 12:07:00 PM)

    This emotional composition touches, my 10 for it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 1, 2011


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