Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

A Day In Bed - Poem by Dom Hunt

Soft sheets and skin
Warm whispers 
Were touches linger
Unknown places tingle
Desire and love consumed
Chaos, quite mixed
Crossing into realms 
Of places in our dreams
Being in one mind 
Things unsaid told by our bodies
Time has no place here
Bodies and souls rise together 
Then drift into the land of bliss
Break of day till sunset


Comments about A Day In Bed by Dom Hunt

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/4/2012 5:47:00 PM)

    Very passionate write Dom, Your words drew me in from the very start, then peaked, and gentily relaxed into a soft slumber... yes, This one had nice imagery and flowed like honey! Great Write!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 28, 2012



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