Dom Hunt

Rookie - 13 Points (17/04/1966 / geelong)

A Mystery

You are the sun
You bring hope after the darkness of night
Light up my days with new beginnings 
Hold me in your rays of warmth
You are  the wind
Changeable always
You blow strong and weak
Surprising day to day 
You are  the rain
I need you to grow
Yet dampen my spirits
Nourishing, devastating
You are the ocean
Mysterious, deep
Tidal is your nature
Endless waves of emotion you bring
You are the tempest
Making me feel alive
Exhilarating, scary
Life on the edge
You are the moon
Waxing and waning
Peaceful, beautiful 
A wonder to me
You are the mountains
Formidable, grand
Standing before you
Entranced by your immensity 
You are the snow
Softly you fall about
Each part is different
Pure and driven
You are the trees
Shading me from hurts
Shedding again and again
Offering hope anew
You are the flowers 
Bright, cheerful
Many colors 
Change with the seasons
You are the mystery
Never revealing all
Keeping parts hidden
Holding me spellbound 

Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012
Edited: Sunday, July 21, 2013

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Comments about this poem (A Mystery by Dom Hunt )

  • Rookie - 115 Points Pani Gleeson (9/2/2012 6:29:00 PM)

    Lovely, softness ~wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,511 Points Godfrey Morris (8/25/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    A great write - Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (8/24/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    Very, very, very impressive! The beauty of this well penned and touching write is the rich imagery and the reservoir of powerful words embedded in it! 10+++ Your poetic TALENT is clearly shown in this romantic and smooth flowing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep giving the Poetry World more food for thought! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City! (Report) Reply

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