A deer loses its life
As it absorbed in
The musical sounds by hunter.
A fish loses its life
As it eats the bait
Offered by the fisherman.
An elephant loses its independence
While satisfying its genitals
With a female elephant.
O my dear, the more you try
To satisfy your senses
The more you become morose.
More good is freedom and curtailing freedom for pleasure's sake is sometimes makes the senses in bad situation and the poem is very nice and wonderful in creating the perfect situations of loss of freedom even for an elephant who is mighty and big and also powerful. I doesn't like to go further and I interested it very much.
A fish loses its life As it eats the bait Offered by the fisherman.... nice one...10 one should not fall to greed even it is essential to feed the care must be taken to see why is it provided free?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
there is a profound depth in these words, this will make someone really think. i got what you wanted to convey through this wonderful poem. i like your ink. nice write.