A Demi-God Welcomes Spring Poem by Daniel Brick

A Demi-God Welcomes Spring

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Earth's increase, foison plenty,
Barns and garners never empty,
Vines with clust'ring bunches growing,
Plants with goodly burden bowing;
Spring come to you....
CERES in Shakespeare's THE TEMPEST

Now Spring arises from
deep sources we trust every year
to fulfill their bond with Nature.
Life pours forth from there,
and spreads outward into a finite
distance we cannot track. For us
it is simply everywhere the World
as Spring. It is a story we cannot
cause or stop, but we read again
and again in measureless delight.
With happiness so enveloping,
how is it we can still have
poor thoughts and find only
a poverty of spirit in our lives?

Let me begin my answer with green
thoughts, ignoring those details
which blur the real into fiction.
Living in the moment is the path
to joy, but abide awhile with me
in the vexed world of thought
before you surrender to the season.

I speak to you who make yourselves
my worthy companions, and help me dream
this season in absolute detail. I know
for certain, in one of our fluctuating
futures, you will take every step
by my side to fulfill our holy mission.
Look - look deeply into the shimmering
morning light, and know that future is now!

It is not a task resolved by will
or command, but by quiet participation.
Spring itself is real enough, still it
displays a presence, not a being.
Its presence can be made continuous
as we breathe its air, circulate
its freshness, carry its joy to
a higher plateau from which we
will glimpse Eternity...
That's why I call this participation
a holy mission. If we, merely denizens
of the surface, can summon our finest
desire with total sincerity,
the World itself will submit that goodness
into the universal working of things.
Then we, co-creators with higher powers,
will have turned a presence into a being -
A transient but beautiful season ensues
for all to love and enjoy, and Nature
thrives through our good deed.

Now! I summon you to awake
from this of sleep of thought
that has closed your senses. I bid
you to open your senses. Before you looms
the Portal of Spring, a huge tree that
spreads its yellow-green leaves
into the yellow-green light. Just walk
under its canopy and breathe freely.
Cross this Portal in an instant
and step into your happiness!

Thursday, March 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 07 April 2017

Now! I summon you to awake from this of sleep of thought that has closed your senses. I bid you to open your senses. Before you looms the Portal of Spring, a huge tree that spreads its yellow-green leaves into the yellow-green light. Just walk under its canopy and breathe freely. Cross this Portal in an instant and step into your happiness! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Ahhhhhhhhhhh, thank you for this revelry of the senses at the closing of this thought-provoking poem because, you see, it has been a long cold and gray winter and sporing is springing all over itself outside my window and I keep dashing out every few minutes and cleaning a flower pot or putting cushions out on the chairs or dipping angels and squirrels and rabbits and frogs and zebras and elephants into buckets of water cuz tomorrow we plant flowers and there is the portal of Spring! Thank you, Daniel, your call to Spring could not be ignored. ..... outside I go......

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Daniel Brick 08 April 2017

Ahhhhh, this is wonderful, Susan, my poem inspires the Outdoor Susan to accelerate the spring season with gardening. This is not the intellectual or academic experience of poetry but the opening of the senses, becoming a force within spring, doing nature's work alongside her.

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Nosheen Irfan 31 March 2017

Richly sensuous write. Living in the moment is happiness if only we humans could master this art. This poem is a call to positiveness. Spring is transient but let's enjoy while it is here. And yes, let the Nature thrive through our goodness. So beautifully written. Full of green thoughts. The reader can feel the spring in this poem n rejoice in its beauty as one would relish the leafy trees n colorful blossoms. A huge 10.

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Liza Sudina 30 March 2017

Yes, Help me to open my senses! somebody, help me! ! ! I fail when tried to do it myself, :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2017

STORY OF SPRING DOES NOT STOP. SPRING IS LOVABLE. Morning light of spring brings fortune. A transient but beautiful season ensues for all to love and enjoy. Nature becomes graceful and we feel nature well during spring season. A powerful imagery is drawn in this poem.10

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Daniel Brick 31 March 2017

Thanks for reading my poem so thoroughly. Imagery was my goal, but I also wanted to convey the THOUGHT OF SPRING, that is, the abstract experience that doesn't depend upon immediate experience.

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