A Demi-God Speaks For The Earth Poem by Daniel Brick

A Demi-God Speaks For The Earth

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Who speaks for the Earth?
Carl Sagan

Let's divide the world between us
and vie to see who loves their portion
most sincerely. But how will we
judge our passions, or rather the depth
of our passions? Is there a calculation
in mathematics to determine degrees
of love? Unlikely? What if I place my right
hand over my heart, and my left hand
palm down on the Earth, will I be able
to measure Love in terms of a rhythm
common to heart and ground?
Perhaps we should seek a simpler test:
All four hands palming the Earth,
we will look deep into each other's eyes,
and find in their depths the true
dimensions of love. And I'm certain
we will discover in each other equal love of Earth.

Let's sit for awhile on the woodchips
ringing this still leafless maple tree,
its branches only a wintry gray,
no sign yet of the sap of Spring,
the flow of new life. Three massive pines
evergreen impose color and shape in our line
of vision. It is enough for now, until
April rains descend and release
the green energy locked in the ground.
Then a familiar rejoicing will resume!

Dear friend, it is better, far better,
to have a heart broken than lost.
A broken heart still occupies
its niche in your breast, and casts
its broken light over body and soul.
That light, however imperfect,
is still divine radiance that ensures
the beauty of each passing day.
And beauty will attract other beauty
without end. It is only required
that you love the Earth, because
she is the Mother of us all,
she is hearth and home, source
and destination, the place
our children will inhabit...
Do not think to possess the Earth,
become one with the Earth. Make
of her abundance a daily feast
of never-ending proportions,
make of her blessings a place of perfection.

Sunday, April 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,optimism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is number 333 in my Poemhunter collection. That number - 333 - is of special significance to me. It is NOT a lucky number, I do not use it for personal gain. Rather seeing it in the course of everyday life makes me alert, observant, responsible. It is a summons for me to live as Thoreau wisely put it DELIBERATELY. it derives from a dream in which I was playing with masterful grace Mozart's Piano Sonata in B flat, K.333. But I can't play the piano! A voice then said to me, perhaps Mozart's (!) , 'Daniel, it you love this music, you can play it. It is yours.'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2022

Is there a calculation in mathematics to determine degrees of love? I have already told it earlier that no measuring stick can measure the length, breadth and depth of love. A wonderful poem.

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Tom Allport 23 September 2017

a very thoughtful and optimistic poem of a better way forward for mankind? maybe one day man will fully understand what it actually means to be kind! .........well written Daniel

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2017

Very sincere and reflective poem. After our own mother this earth is the one who nurtures us in endless ways. Of all the Nature's representatives it is closest to us providing means for all our sensory delights. To love and care for her is our primary duty. Enjoyed reading your notes too.

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Daniel Brick 21 April 2017

Nurture, Provide, Delight - that's what Mother Earth gives us; Protect, Conserve, Love - that's what her human children give in return. We are allies in our commitment to the Planet! !

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Bharati Nayak 13 April 2017

It is only required that you love the Earth, because she is the Mother of us all, she is hearth and home, source and destination, the place our children will inhabit... Do not think to possess the Earth, become one with the Earth. Make of her abundance a daily feast of never-ending proportions, make of her blessings a place of perfection. - - - - - - - - - Love is there not in possession but giving oneself to it, to be one with iit- - - -Earth being the source and destination of our being, we should try not to possess but love it completely. This poem is a pure song of love for Earth.

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Daniel Brick 13 April 2017

That's it exactly, Bharati: Purity + Love + Earth = Happiness for people and planet. I wanted this to be a hymn about issues everyone can support. I don't want to support a divisive position and attack others. Rather find common ground and what is more common that the earth we stand on. So this is a non-political politicaal poem! !

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Rajnish Manga 09 April 2017

This is all very fantastic - the poem as well as the Poet's Notes. The imagery is quite fascinating and very thought provoking. Thanks. I quote- ' Is there a calculation / in mathematics to determine degrees / of love? Unlikely?

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