ankita srivastava


A Dream Destination - Poem by ankita srivastava

I want to be where
i can find peace there

A small cabin of clay made
live in solitude and so glad

Sarrounded by flowers and breezy air
can enjoy sweet humming of bees there

A fresh morning droping from night veil slowly
and noon welcome with sun glory

Silky evening where linnet sing
moony night where my dreams find wing

I close my eyes and find myself in dreamland
where i can see to and fro only wet sand

I hear in my deep heart's core
a river water lapping with sounds by the shore!


Comments about A Dream Destination by ankita srivastava

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (2/4/2012 5:30:00 AM)

    yes; a dream destination where we will find peace, solitude! ! ! ! everyone wants this! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Felix John (10/26/2011 9:51:00 AM)

    The rhyming of the poem is a success.you've captured the essence of a beautiful enviroment.one can feel and yearn for all this beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 6:41:00 AM)

    well said..a dream destination is always the best destination... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,823 Points Tiku . (8/26/2011 1:40:00 AM)

    very nice.sweet flow and nice wordplay.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 461 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/19/2010 3:21:00 PM)

    i hear in my deep heart's core
    a river water lapping with sounds by the shore! .........
    flute by surge reels through whorl
    yet the shore resounds from core, quite passionate dream, heart when splashes by tune of ecstasy, well penned, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 18, 2009



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