Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 64 Points (Germany)

A Drinkers Wish - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

Make a wish
While you drink like a fish
Maybe the lady in red
Will descend on your lips with a kiss
Before the bouncer throws you out
Of the club in one piece

Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi


Comments about A Drinkers Wish by Sylvia Chidi

  • Gold Star - 9,939 Points Amitava Sur (7/1/2014 8:45:00 PM)

    Ha Ha - very nice,

    Instead of that lady's beautiful kiss
    I will be totally dismissed........... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (5/1/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Walter Sanson Lotilla (9/7/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    Hi Sylvia,
    The Bacchanalian cries beckons.... I'll drink to that
    Perhaps it's worth the throw from the bouncer
    Cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (11/9/2008 9:45:00 AM)

    So true a great big ten from Me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (10/1/2008 12:00:00 PM)

    My 10 goes for you.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elysabeth Faslund (6/30/2007 9:42:00 AM)

    Naw. Let the bouncer have someone collect up all the pieces! Drinking like a fish...Hmmmm. I could make comments so much easier! The lady in red weighs 400lbs...so, indeed, let her kiss him. This is a funny, anytime poem. It just was read when I needed more caffeine...now, I don't. Goody one! xxElysabeth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Preston (2/25/2006 11:49:00 AM)

    Nice lighthearted verse. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (2/19/2006 9:33:00 AM)

    As a Scot, this could be our national anthem! Slainte mhath (cheers) . Thankyou for your comments on my work, it is much appreciated.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shogunoka Ledesma III (2/16/2006 2:40:00 PM)

    Simply intoxicating... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Phillip Sawatzky (2/12/2006 11:19:00 PM)

    I'll drink to that! Phillip (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 11, 2006


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