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Make a wish
While you drink like a fish
Maybe the lady in red
Will descend on your lips with a kiss
Before the bouncer throws you out
Of the club in one piece
Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi
Sylvia Chidi
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Saturday, February 11, 2006 |
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Saturday, February 11, 2006 |
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Comments about this poem (A drinkers wish
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Sylvia Chidi
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Walter Sanson Lotilla (9/7/2011 1:46:00 AM)
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Hi Sylvia,
The Bacchanalian cries beckons.... I'll drink to that
Perhaps it's worth the throw from the bouncer
Cheers
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Bob Blackwell (11/9/2008 9:45:00 AM)
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So true a great big ten from Me.
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Elysabeth Faslund (6/30/2007 9:42:00 AM)
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Naw. Let the bouncer have someone collect up all the pieces! Drinking like a fish...Hmmmm. I could make comments so much easier! The lady in red weighs 400lbs...so, indeed, let her kiss him. This is a funny, anytime poem. It just was read when I needed more caffeine...now, I don't. Goody one! xxElysabeth
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Anna Russell (2/19/2006 9:33:00 AM)
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As a Scot, this could be our national anthem! Slainte mhath (cheers) . Thankyou for your comments on my work, it is much appreciated.
Hugs
Anna xxx
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