A Drop! Poem by Deepti Agarwal

a longing for past can clearly be felt here.I have also mourned for past in my poem 'yearning for bygone days'.But we shade tears for that thing which we can never get back in our life.Its better to forget past and look for present. so we should enjoy every moment. nicely done.

time when bedazzled by the love yet the crooning by the history eyes when steeped in tears by the shadow dew seems to be befuddled by the sun rain yet drops blazing the glory of love....................yet wistful as hurtful, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

yes... fresh... it is still rolling down incessantly! birds and butterflies are still around. may not be your, those old ones! so stop shedding salty drops and cheer up!

Never worry about salty drops Its just purifier for your eyes When the eyes get clear vision You can see things in black and white Leave the black behind Go for the white ahead Ohh… it’s a wonderland we are in At any ant age, any cost, at any Drop We can’t stop enjoying this life. Hai na bolo bolo...? ?

the mood of sadness well captured, but God has made man so resilient that we snap out of our sad moments with time.

Moved by it deeply! ! ! ! looking forward to see more work of you! !

deep and moving. when strong people break into tears, they are overwhelmed with many things apart from what they actual reason that makes them cry.10/10 realistic work.

nostalgic and a shade dark very well written...emotive cheers

dropps are becoming less salty when you pour out your feelings as poetry....10

excepting the tear from the persoon.....rest of the mood is brought out through nature and other creatures around..when there is this gloom inside everything out would seem so....a superb write..itake this into my favs