Faint fairy out of fantasy,
Draws out its slender wand
To touch the heart in its warm stead,
So to keep it running bright
Like the summer coming straight,
Quick within like an ocean
In its watery joy.
Into it to sink deep in the heart,
Where the glow charts
Brightness to get the vibrancy.
The smile from the light being
Shows satisfaction.
One word, one thought: whimsical. great imagination put together into a nice little poem.
beautiful poem.the words are meaningful too.wonderfull imagination.enjoyed reading this poem. voted10 surya
It's a powerful description with strong imageries. Economy of words is your key.I love the flow & the rendering.A good Romantic lyricist you are.Great work!
Faint fairy out of fantasy, Draws out its slender wand To touch the heart in its warm stead, So to keep it running bright Like the summer coming straight, Quick within like an ocean In its watery joy. Into it to sink deep in the heart, Where the glow charts Brightness to get the vibrancy. The smile from the light being Shows satisfaction. Effective alliteration and imagery create a wondrous introduction. The remainder becomes a stream of conscious perception of a brightness attempting to emerge from a hazy existence followed by a smile at its inception. Clarity got lost in the forest of similes. The last line is a climax to a crescendo that didn't develop.
Clarence Brown (11/6/2009 12: 19: 00 PM) I loved a fairy's touch ---------- wonderful. I have always imagined it so.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Enchanting, love the use of a fairy...very good write Obinna