Sandra Feldman


A Fantastic Trip - Poem by Sandra Feldman

You and I,
We live to write,
And breath and hug the Sea,
We hear Its sound,
Its movement, found,
Night after night,
Hypnotic mystery.

Oh, to be Free,
And sail the night,
In our ship,
'The Fantasy',
And there remain,
Never return,
To cruel reality


Comments about A Fantastic Trip by Sandra Feldman

  • Veteran Poet - 1,584 Points Tanya Stewart-boateng (8/1/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    Its very tempting, even for myself to get wrapped up in fantasies. They are so much more exciting. Its a whole other life of our making that we can shift and change at will. Love fantasies. But reality is the devil that calls us home. Love you poems Sandra. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,283 Points Josey Alfred (4/11/2015 12:22:00 PM)

    Yes fantasy is soft and enjoyable, but to remain there is not really realistic. Really good reading.thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,018 Points Leah Ayliffe (7/8/2014 9:07:00 PM)

    What a lovely idea pursued in this poem. Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,904 Points Mr. Nobody (7/7/2014 8:09:00 PM)

    I'm a guy and I fix stuff
    Why don't we put all the cruel reality
    on a big boat
    and give the sail a puff?
    Fanta-sea flavor
    rough?
    Fantasy Land
    or Fanta-sea?
    Both are fine with me.


    Another lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/7/2014 7:27:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Sandra. It's a fantastic trip, on the ship The Fantasy, where you travel into the sea with hypnotic mystery...but never to return to the cruelty...Our thoughts travel too far and come back to where we stand.
    Short and beautiful Poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 7, 2014


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