A Fate Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

A Fate

Rating: 5.0


still sleep and dream,
before the first ray will wake you up.

let weakness and sadness leave you
there will be a tomorrow for you
beautiful and as bright
as the feather light
there will be a smell
for you grass and the earth,
you will see flowers birth,
you will feel the warm light wind
every hour,
will be like the known film for you,
how to have first-rate, wonderful things
which in the collection you will want.


still sleep and dream,
before the first ray will wake you up.

they will walk away slowly somewhere to the South,
stars tired out and the old moon,
and with them all strife.
this way a more arises. beautiful life.
today individually - tomorrow, together.
the one what is given,
he will create for you, the Heaven,
because is giving him. a FATE
let weakness and sadness leave you
there will be a tomorrow for you
beautiful and as bright
as the feather light

still sleep and dream,
before the first ray will wake you up.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 16 August 2009

Beautifully written. There will certainly be a tomorrow when weakness and sadness leave you and fill you with hope. Voted 10.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 28 August 2009

A poem oozing out optimism and positive attitude for life. Such reassurances are necessary for invigorating ourselves and our Selves.

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Dagmara Anna 26 August 2009

Very beautiful and very well written. Delightful. I am admiring such writing :))

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 August 2009

'fate'........ Fate is something strange indeed.. don't know what is written in my fate. this is good, last few lines kinda inspirational too.. kinda of a had a soothing like.. very free flowing lines, nice to read..10 with lots of loves shan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 August 2009

Between dusk and dawn, and between day and night, the deteriorating moon and the youthful sun collides, to mock up the loss of anger, anxiety, sorrow, joy, jubilance, which were left over by human when they'e not on their feets.

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Mystic Indian 24 August 2009

Its one of those days when one gets to wake up a little early and remain in bed, till the world wakes up.. its about the time for the world to wake up, and you are awake before it. beautiful, masterful work. hats off.10/10 and my vote too!

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