A Few Words Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Few Words

Rating: 4.4


Too few words
Upsetting the silence
You do not trust...

Listen!
Your ears cannot tell you
What I am saying...

Unnatural quiet
Gives the heart most true
Away......


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 05 September 2009

Like a rolling stone......wonderful....10++ Sir.

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

Short and sweet...........

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Lalitha iyer 31 December 2009

Beautiful thoughts..........................nice....................

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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

nice, short and to the point. a great write Romeo

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Adeline Foster 16 April 2012

Now this has depth, well done. Read mine - Ode to the World - Adeline

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Amy Marie 26 January 2011

It's short, easy to read, and well-written.

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Word.. as sharp as a knife, Silience just as sharp! A true write. Well done.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 January 2010

Sometimes silence is a woman's weapon...and it is effective. Meaningful poem! 10+

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