Dr Hitesh Sheth

Rookie - 3 Points (Birth Place: Earth)

A Flow Of Grace - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Yeah!
Slow and Slow
ye stare
with eyes-
eyes innocent
as doe

Slow and Slow
you emptied
my cup
A cup
of woe

Slow and Slow
ye vanquished
my foes
hidden
inner foes

Slow and Slow
Ye pour
A wine of joy
in a goblet
with glow

Slow and Slow
Ye stamp
my cells
from
head to toe

Slow and slow
Ye weed out
ignorance
with your
divine hoe

Slow and slow
Ye open
petals
of my mind
for glorious show

Slow and slow
you rescued
me from claws
A dangerous
Maya's claws

Slow and slow
you weeded
out my flaws
habitual
mortal flaws

Slow and slow
Ye brought me
under yoke
A yoke
of divine law

Slow and slow
please come
in my life
with your
majestic flow

Because
Our separation
waiting on death row
our rendezvous
hot desert in a
storm of snow



Dr Hitesh C Sheth

26/01/2009


Comments about A Flow Of Grace by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • Rookie - 226 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/30/2011 10:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful rhymes and flow....
    Very enchanting words..
    10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 6 Points Rachel Ann Butler (9/19/2009 6:14:00 PM)

    you opened
    petals
    of mind
    for glorious show


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  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (7/2/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    Your Love doth flow
    Maybe now slow and slow
    But, with passing time
    Sweetly flowing
    Steadily growing
    Silently filling
    It shall gain strength
    And embrace with open arms
    The Ocean of Love!
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/16/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a modern expressions of love..it flows like a spring in the garden of lovers eyes..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/9/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    Enchanting rhymes - cool (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rajiv Kumar Aukhojee (5/30/2009 12:03:00 PM)

    like ur poems specially the last part where the rendez vous in desert and in the storm snow wow thats mesmerising (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/16/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    a repetition of the first line slow and slow in almost every stanza for effects. and the final line of every stanza does rhyme. good flow of writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/13/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    avery beautiful and sweet poem...slow and slow the building based on a strong base the love wonderfully grow....slow and slow...the most beautiful effective touching loving show..I enjoyed it..SLOW AND SLOW.................10+++++ FOR three of you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Myrtle Thomas (4/6/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    Slowly ever so slowly you held me prisoner to this poem. very deep, it flows from one stanza to the next.Vivid a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (4/5/2009 5:42:00 AM)

    Slowly and beautifully you have unfolded our need for love 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Glenn Mark Amor (3/31/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    nice piece of art..

    good job...

    emotional poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (3/30/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    Skillful use of simile and metaphor. Your last lines are very emotional
    and beautiful.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mamta Agarwal (3/28/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    very beautiful composition, nice presentation, lingering last stanza with its touching imagery10


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Sasidharan Vellat Menon (3/24/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    Nice imagination. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Honest Heart (3/17/2009 6:21:00 PM)

    WOW! ! ! ....greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat.....greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat...i love it :) :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonya Florentino (3/15/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    yes, slow and easy, slow, slow... don't end it please, please... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nia Riz (2/1/2009 11:11:00 AM)

    and slow and slow i am telling you....this pom is very emotional and beautiful! !
    Nia (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 906 Points Seema Chowdhury (2/1/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    very very nice and emotional lines. thanks for sharing they are beautiful words of wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (1/30/2009 9:44:00 PM)

    the title goes well with the poem nicely written

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (1/30/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    melluflous flow
    ...reverbrating love's glow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 4, 2013