A Fool In A Million Ways Poem by Syed Mizbahuddeen

A Fool In A Million Ways

Rating: 3.7


They say that life is short in its span,
So go with the world if it’d change,
But I am not an adjustable spanner,
To change with people in every aspect and manner

The world’s in its doom and foolish ways,
With righteousness and modesty having no remains,
Trends will come and trends will change,
But to the surprise of the world I've my own ways

My words can, but not change the world,
And revert it back to the simpler days,
But someday, the world will know it’s a fool being made,
By money and gold in a million ways

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The world stands for the people in this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 06 July 2013

But someday, the world will know it’s a fool being made, By money and gold in a million ways This sums up the theme of the poem. Good conclusion.

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Raabia Tabassum 06 July 2013

I like the way you have come up with the theme of the poem. Great work but i think in a poem if you are rhyming stuff then the whole poem should be equally rhymed. It shouldnt be like one rhyme here and there and in other stanzas no rhyme. Maybe You Could Check That. Anyways Great Work! Really Loved The Message Of The Poem: D

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Syed Mizbahuddeen

Syed Mizbahuddeen

Pallavaram, Chennai
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